tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post2606551371403840351..comments2024-03-29T11:35:30.345+00:00Comments on Yorkshire Pudding: 1970Yorkshire Puddinghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-71397241039145838662019-01-25T01:49:07.069+00:002019-01-25T01:49:07.069+00:00You deem to dream it would seem...You deem to dream it would seem...Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-42003506375458843442019-01-25T00:11:34.738+00:002019-01-25T00:11:34.738+00:00Jules Veme was a great writer - not as well known ...Jules Veme was a great writer - not as well known as Jules Verne but better.Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-71597391020795036892019-01-24T23:13:33.054+00:002019-01-24T23:13:33.054+00:00The balloon was immediately deflated.
Some peo...The balloon was immediately deflated. <br /><br />Some people are experts at being able to do that, and barely bat an eye when doing so; or realise the lasting impact their words can have.<br /><br />Actually to my eyes "Verne" in your top illustration looks much like "Veme". <br /><br />Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15835982875620956300noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-76170153229360032432019-01-24T20:44:17.780+00:002019-01-24T20:44:17.780+00:00More polished yes and in terms of graphic design m...More polished yes and in terms of graphic design more likely to score good marks.Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-80471255814999113872019-01-24T19:40:17.116+00:002019-01-24T19:40:17.116+00:00A significant comment, to still ring in your mind ...A significant comment, to still ring in your mind so many years later. I think that's the kind of thing that's considered a watershed moment, is it not? I do think the second version is much improved. Polished might be the word I am looking for.jenny_ohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15475480579733466963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-34954946361272942002019-01-24T18:32:25.213+00:002019-01-24T18:32:25.213+00:00Yes I did and it is a leson that has stayed with m...Yes I did and it is a leson that has stayed with me for almost fifty years - Do not be too easily satisfied!Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-23146820173805424922019-01-24T18:31:25.926+00:002019-01-24T18:31:25.926+00:00It is too easy to say to a child, "Oh! That&#...It is too easy to say to a child, "Oh! That's really good! Well done!" Harder to push up their standards.Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-53635720564892991282019-01-24T18:30:22.696+00:002019-01-24T18:30:22.696+00:00Looking back after nearly fifty years, I believe t...Looking back after nearly fifty years, I believe the two of you might be right about the name but see my comment below.Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-20754782252743727752019-01-24T18:28:56.383+00:002019-01-24T18:28:56.383+00:00But much more care and time went into the second d...But much more care and time went into the second draft and as I recall the paper it came from was "Graphic Design" where better levels of accuracy were required.Yorkshire Puddinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06019673884543913089noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-35260818712170462032019-01-24T18:28:18.500+00:002019-01-24T18:28:18.500+00:00You really learned something in that exercise!You really learned something in that exercise!Redhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17996243850279671523noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-14175327213939988022019-01-24T18:05:52.351+00:002019-01-24T18:05:52.351+00:00Steve, I think the same about the author's nam...Steve, I think the same about the author's name.Librarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05704656564078750607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-52743529333704260552019-01-24T18:05:32.655+00:002019-01-24T18:05:32.655+00:00Oh, I have just noticed Steve said the same about ...Oh, I have just noticed Steve said the same about the author's name.Librarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05704656564078750607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-54924875182760539592019-01-24T18:04:55.522+00:002019-01-24T18:04:55.522+00:00Hmm... I may be alone there, but I actually prefer...Hmm... I may be alone there, but I actually prefer the "rough draft". The writing of the author's name is more beautiful, and the watercolour blue sky gives it an extra bit of... I don't know, something.Librarianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05704656564078750607noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-64046161625967300882019-01-24T16:29:37.743+00:002019-01-24T16:29:37.743+00:00Funny how what a teacher says can sometimes really...Funny how what a teacher says can sometimes really stick. (I have to remember that!) I actually like your typeface for the author's name better in the top version, for what that's worth. And it's interesting that you flipped the banners, so that "Around the World" is on top in the second one -- I guess that connects more to the illustration?Steve Reedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11684120060438252945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-13883584.post-69817347710416346112019-01-24T14:21:22.066+00:002019-01-24T14:21:22.066+00:00 A good teacher knows when a student has more in h... A good teacher knows when a student has more in him (or her) than he (or she) thought. Ms. Moonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09776404747858099919noreply@blogger.com