17 February 2025

Haiku

 

Idle river flows

A fish leaps in the air

Splash! Water reclaims

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I took the photograph of The River Idle south of Retford, Nottinghamshire in October 2020.

25 comments:

  1. I saw your comment about haiku over at Arctic Fox's blog -- I'm always happy to meet more haiku lovers! I've practised that poetry form for many years now, trying to capture the elusive "haiku moment."

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    1. That is what inspired me to create one Debra.

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  2. I love walking near water. So calming.

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    1. In ancient Britain, as in many other countries, our ancestors venerated water sources like springs for without water there is no life.

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  3. How can a river be idle? It is constantly in motion!!

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    1. That picture is of The River Idle. I do not know how it got that name but maybe an idle river is one that moves slowly, idling along.

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    2. Sounds just like "this" River, slowly idling along.

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    3. Yup! Get a move on River!

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  4. Nice Haiku. My older son was good at those in high school and his teacher wanted to publish some. I think M said no to that and left school that same year anyway, got himself a job instead.

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    1. I have heard you can make a decent living as a haiku writer. They even give you a company car - Japanese of course.

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  5. I like haikus and wish more people would write them.

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  6. Indeed, Idle by name and idle by nature. It does look like a rather tamed river.

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    1. I would say that nearly all rivers in England are well "tamed" as you put it.

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  7. I see sheep, how sweet,

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  8. I thought an high cue was something you see at the Crucible YP?

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  9. A peaceful photo. At first glance I thought it was a Constable painting - it has the same tranquillity.

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    1. I can see where you are coming from with that remark Carol.

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  10. Haiku is a bit short for conveying profound thought,. But the photos are welcoming. 'Idle' goes back to old English meaning worthless, empty and vacant. Poor old river.

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