4 December 2023

Poem

Windgather Rocks

On the ridge, bones peek through
Divulging what lies beneath
Something solid and lasting
Where Bronze Age hunters paused
Perusing the land like birds of prey
Considering their next moves.
 
Four thousand years later
Lingering at the self-same spot
Watching a treeless distance appear
Bereft of wild boar or hunting deer
Reaching up to green Back Spond,
Kettleshulme and far beyond.
 
On this abridged December day
Silent rocks still show the way.
Cares require a gathering up
Just like prevailing winds
About this jagged jawbone
Where the golden plover sings

20 comments:

  1. Lovely words, pondering the ancient past.

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    1. A place with a poetic name like "Windgather Rocks" needed a poem to go with it.

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  2. I like poems that take us back thousands of years. It sounds so much better in poetry.

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  3. That's beautiful and I do love the look of Windgather Rocks.

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    1. I have walked in the valleys east and west of there. It seems like the roof of the world.

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  4. Beautiful, and very evocative.

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    1. I wanted to give a sense of somewhere beyond everyday life and the usual endless chatter about war, economic matters and celebrities.

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  5. Excellent photo and most enjoyable poem YP.

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  6. The earth will be here long after us,

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  7. We are only passing through unlike the land that will always be here. Great poem YP.

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    1. Thanks for reading my poem Dave and for responding to it with genuine understanding.

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  8. A beautiful place. I can see why you were inspired, Neil. Well done!

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    1. Thanks Ellen! It was the name as much as anything that inspired me.

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  9. What about Woolgather Rocks?

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