After the ferry had brought us across The River Ore to the little wharf on Orford Ness we walked along in September sunshine. Brambles were clustered like grapes in the bushes and two rams with thick curled horns grazed in a marshy meadow nearby. We had a mile to go to the red and white striped lighthouse and my heart felt light. I began to sing a song. Only a few words came at first. I was thinking about fishermen... "At dusk we set sail for the west coast of Holland". They were the first words.
I kept humming and singing the tune I had made up and as we returned three hours later to catch the ferry back to Orford, a woman birdwatcher waiting by some brambly bushes heard me and kindly complimented me on my singing. I told her I was just making the song up and that it would never make the hit parade.
Fragments of the song stayed with me and in Windows 10 I found a voice recorder app so back home in Sheffield I have tried my best to work the seed of my song idea up into something presentable. Here it is. All my own work:-
Orford Ness
La-la-la-la la-la-la-la-la-la-la (tune)
At dusk we set sail for the west coast of Holland
Pursuing the herring by night
And when we came back to the east coast of England
We found our way home by the light
Of Orford Ness
Sing a song of the sea
May her light
Illuminate our history
There was Tom and Joe Cable and old Billy Bodkin
We hauled in with all of our might
And when we returned to the east coast of England
We found our way home by the light
Of Orford Ness
Sing a song of the sea
May her light
Illuminate our history
Of farmers and thatchers and salty sea sailors
They peopled the world that we knew
And when later I strolled to the river with Nancy
Her sweet eyes had turned sapphire blue
Reflected in that summer sun sinking
Where wild geese and cormorants flew
While out on the ness
The lighthouse was shining
On the shingle and Nancy’s hair too
Of Orford Ness
Sing a song of the sea
May her light
Illuminate our history
Those days they have gone
And they won’t be returning
Like the herrings that swam in the sea
When we sailed from The Ore to the west coast of Holland
Billy Bodkin, The Cables and me…
When we sailed from The Ore to the west coast of Holland
Billy Bodkin, The Cables and me…
La-la-la-la la-la-la-la-la-la-la (tune)
You are a renaissance man, YP! I'm at work so I can't listen to the video now, but I will when I get home. :)
ReplyDeleteTell me the truth when you hear it Steve.
DeleteOK, belatedly, I have listened -- and BRAVO is all I can say. You have skillfully evoked nostalgia for a past time and an old romance, and captured a sense of place, too. Seriously, a professional musician could record this song! (Not to cast any aspersions on your own recording. :) )
DeleteNeil Theasby, you are BRILLIANT! This is a wonderful song with a wonderful tune and absolutely wonderful words and your own beautiful photographs as well. Does your son know someone at the BBC or someplace who can get this before the eyes and ears of the publi? You will be more famous than Ian.,,,
ReplyDeleteAm I gushing too much? Truly, though, that is incredible on so many levels, and I am not easily impressed. Proud to have made your acquaintance.
You are making me blush. Thank you Bob. This means a lot from a fellow who loves music and knows how to make it.
Delete👏👏 Bravo - Well done..what a great ballad. And you have a fine singing voice YP abd a gift for bringing your vision to life..I could visualise it all as you sang it.
ReplyDeleteAll that walking you do gave you good control over your breathing while you sang..impressed. (have some concept of this from eons ago doing Gilbert & Sullivan... three little maids are we...ect)
I would have liked to be standing up as I sang this recorded version Elle but I needed to be in front of the computer screen. I think it is always best to be standing up when you sing. Thanks for your nice comment.
DeleteWhat a delicious treat! Mr. Pudding , your voice is lovely!
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind. thank you Linda Sue.
DeleteListen carefully. Hear that sound? It's applause.
ReplyDeleteAlphie
I bow to thee fair Alphie.
DeleteThat was amazing ! Loved it...very reminiscent of folk clubs I used to go to in my youth. Did you have your hand by your ear as you sang ? I hope that Sheila approved of you strolling with Nancy? Next stop Britain's got Talent then ?
ReplyDeleteI don't think it is the kind of song they would ever entertain on "Britain's Got Talent" and for this I am thankful.
DeleteVery nice, Mr. P! You have a fine voice and it is good to hear it and your song is quite lovely.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you posted about the issue with this post not showing up in our sidebars, because I would not have wanted to miss this. Very nicely written and sung.
ReplyDeleteI love it! Is there no end to your talents! It is a wonderful song that reminds me of the folk songs of days past. You have an excellent voice as well Mr. P! Thank you for your hard work on this delight - I enjoyed it very much!
ReplyDeleteMr. Pudding, I read your blog sporadically and I don't think I've commented before, but I loved your song and video! I am always impressed by those who can sing, as I need the proverbial bucket to carry a tune. I also enjoy your guided tours of the small towns and rural areas of England. I hope to visit someday. I currently live in Texas, having been somewhat of a gypsy around this country. Anyway, well done!
ReplyDeleteHey that's a awesome song. More people should write and sing what they've written.
ReplyDeleteI SO LOVE this! I spent the last two days yesterday with my grandson, and so am so glad your post 'Eh' drew my attention to it! I would have regretted it terribly had it slipped under my radar.
ReplyDeleteAs you may know I have spent the last ten years reading and re-reading the Aubrey-Maturin novels, and almost nothing else in the fiction line. This is a shanty (may I call it that - not to diminish it in any way) worthy of the Gentleman's Magazine in a book of the great Patrick O'Brian. I cannot sing its praises higher.
PS What a great voice you have! True and bang on the note.
Well done YP ! Really enjoyed it and nice to hear your voice after all these years.
ReplyDeleteThat's my singing voice Helen. My speaking voice is like Bugs Bunny! Thanks for dropping by again.
DeleteMy goodness, gracious gummy bears! What a delight! You are a genius, my friend. I absolutely love this wonderful poem in music!
ReplyDeleteI didn't think there was any new folk music but you have proved me wrong. What lilting melody and evocative lyrics.
ReplyDeleteJust once I wrote a couple of verses to a tune I knew already. It took me weeks so I bow to your talent
Excellent to listen to, you have a good voice and the words were lovely.
ReplyDeleteMove aside, Ed Sheeran...Mr.Pud has arrived on the scene!
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