24 October 2022

Poem

Leaves

Everything leaves
Sooner or later -
Last bus home or
Ocean freighter.
The leaves of history books say
What’s here now will slip away,
Will leave,
Be gone.

Little Phoebe
Picked up a leaf
In the autumn woods,
Observed its pigmentation -
Hints of August green
And seldom seen
Russet, copper and
Burnished tangerine.

She brought it to me
With deliberation,
Like a precious gift,
Like a baby bird,
Held in her palm
Like the memory
Of a summer
Lost,
Like the very march of time -
Auguring leaves that shall quiver
Far beyond this rhyme.

23 comments:

  1. Those sweet gifts our grandchildren bring us.

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    1. Autumn leaves may seem like treasure to a small child. How sad that as years pass they acquire ordinariness.

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  2. Ha, just beautiful! Thank you.

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  3. I can just see her carrying that delicate leaf to hand to her old Grumps.

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    1. She held another one in her hand all the way down to the petrol station and back.

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  4. That's a lovely poem. You must share it with Phoebe when she's older.

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    1. I wasn't expecting her to toddle into the poem when I began writing it.

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  5. Poetry at its best. Thank you.

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    1. Thanks for reading it Meike. You know better than most what "leaving" means.

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  6. It's wonderful to see children enjoy the natural world and apparently it's great for their adult mental health, too.
    You paint an evocative picture

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    1. Too much screen time these days - not enough worms, butterflies and walking along sunny paths to distant farms.

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  7. Your poem is as beautiful as the leaves.

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    1. I know you speak your mind River so your honest reaction means a lot to me.

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    1. Thanks for bothering to read it Christina.

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    1. I am glad it struck a chord with you Carol.

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  10. Your poem paints a perfect picture of the joy of Autumn leaves, Neil! I still am amazed at the beautiful leaves around me and I hope your Phoebe always has her sense of wonder!

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    1. The other day she reminded me of that wonder Ellen. Thank you.

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  11. An appropriate poem for the season YP.

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    1. It was our mutual friend JayCee's post that sparked my poem into life.

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  12. It's always interesting to see what catches the eye of a child.

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